Let It Be So...
Thursday, December 6, 2007 by Abhinav
This long due post is my first entry for the December Writing Project at Cafe Writing.
If in the veil of my darkness, thy light takes refuge, let it be so...
If in the pieces of my heart, thy want of love takes refuge, let it be so...
If in my cold, dark nights of despair, thy light takes refuge let it be so...
If in my shriveled hands, the tears of thy plight take refuge, let it be so...
If in my half-lived life, the joy of thy birth takes refuge, let it be so...
If in the shackles of my traditions, thy flight of freedom takes refuge, let it be so...
If in the veil of my darkness, thy light takes refuge, let it be so...
If in the pieces of my heart, thy want of love takes refuge, let it be so...
If in my cold, dark nights of despair, thy light takes refuge let it be so...
If in my shriveled hands, the tears of thy plight take refuge, let it be so...
If in my half-lived life, the joy of thy birth takes refuge, let it be so...
If in the shackles of my traditions, thy flight of freedom takes refuge, let it be so...
Gorgeous, Abhinav. The words, and the sentiment, deeply touched me. You have such a generous soul.
Pure loveliness. I think the world just got a little lighter.
Thanks a ton Sarah. Today I finally made some time to soul-munching ;-)
psst...left you a little something on my blog.
;)
I like the interesting word choice in the first half of each sentence. :)
Thanks a ton Lotus for paying a visit to my humble abode. I look forward to visiting your journal. How did you find out about me? Just curious ;-)
@Sarah: What for you is a little something means the world to me. Thanks. I'm glad to be a simple warrior in the company of Titans.
Dude, thats so beatles!
Good blog, you are one of the serious kinds, i'll be coming back to read :)
Cheers!
N
Thanks for the compliment nothingman. I read your blog. You seem to be an old gun at being Shameless. ;-)
I liked the posts very much and the design of the blog and the fact that you have cared to search for a custom template that so reflects you.
BTW when I wrote the thing, I wanted to ape Tagore. Looks like I haven't been successful. But then it is a herculean task to touch even a wee bit of his style and elegance...