Let's Talk Haiku!
Sunday, November 30, 2008 by Abhinav Maurya
Shintai (New Style) Haiku
THE BEST TEN
FIRST PLACE
in shadow
the moth stills its wings
leaving dreams to fly
Marie Shimane
SECOND PLACE
watercolour–
after lunch he adds
the stork
John Bird
THIRD PLACE
A fallen gulmohur bud:
An incomplete story but
A complete poem.
Abhinav Maurya
SEVEN HONOURABLE MENTIONS
(In no particular order)
night alleyway...
my floodlight shadow
breaks into two
zinovy Vayman
even his trees
stay inside the fence
unseen neighbour
Ann K. Schwader
(A favorite!!!)
working lunch
haiku scribbled
on my napkin
Carmel Lively Westerman
each day continues
a journey of loneliness
crows screech overhead
Marie Shimane
dawn childbirth
when the door opens
a cock crows
Elizabeth Howard
a week of rain
new appreciation for
the nuance of gray
Claudia Coutu Radmore
reprinting the thesis
leaving the mistakes
in
Owen Bullock
OTHER HAIKU OF MERIT
(Zatsu-ei in no particular order)
year's end . . .
the bedding piled up
in the motel
Bruce Ross
vinegar bath
mother's diamond ring
regains its sparkle
Peggy Heinrich
noon church bell ...
how her dress
traces her
Tyrone McDonald
on grass she shone
under the vast sky-
bare and alone
Aju Mukhopadhyay
morn breeze
the trees filter light
and bird songs
john tiong chunghoo
posh café
the first bite of the plum cake
sends me back home
Rafal Zabratynski
a lady's voice
"your poor mother's grave," she says
needs your attention
Howard Lee Kilby
FIRST PLACE
sunny day -
why not get
the divorce papers?
Owen Bullock
(Ahhh!!!)
SECOND PLACE
cabinetmaker
the mortice joints
on his coffin
John Bird
THIRD PLACE
adoption center
she colors her mom black
her dad no face
Victor P. Gendrano
SEVEN HONOURABLE MENTIONS
(In no particular order)
In the morning,
The suit, the tie, the watch…
At night, only you!
Abhinav Maurya
Season of mellow
Yellow fruit; ripeness is all
Too tired to die
Frank Corcoran
Gathering firewood
One life giving up their soul
For another's warmth
Kristin Reynolds
relationship's end:
he calls the baby
his fuck trophy
Richard Stevenson
Swords to bombs:
At war with one another,
At war with ourselves
Abhinav Maurya
a tiny twig trembles
in the blast of wind
first marital quarrel
Victor P. Gendrano
I told him, "Good boy."
His curled tail wagged one last time.
The vet said, "He's gone."
Elizabeth Ewing
OTHER HAIKU OF MERIT
(Zatsu-ei)
depression;
winds thrash the trees,
no rains- whatever it is!
Aju Mukhopadhyay
Trepidation spills
From your every orifice
Revelation lost
Kristin Reynolds
All haiku are under copyrights of their original authors.
Abhi, love your haikus. Congrats on winning top places in this contest. What else are you writing these days?
congrats! i liked the sincerity with which you wrote about the rejection...it feels awful.
they had to change their opinion...u write w'fully well.